I loved this! For only two chapters, you conveyed a ton of information. I ate it up like Loto with a tin of crackers. Yummy and satisfying. You definitely left me wanting more. Xoxo Robin
Thankfully there was not too much gore xD I enjoyed reading it. Thank you
Ahaaahahahaha! The sex was very hot and the ending was hilarious. I know you said the story is over but this could for sure go on! Such a great tale!â¤
A very entertaining read. Love the characters. Thanks!
And the second chapter was even more delicious than the first.
I love the hot, sweaty, unrestrained mansex. There's nothing gentle, but it's still surprisingly tender, given that Loto could have done a dozen nasty things to Ansel. Well, come to think of it, he did, but it was all on the right side of the line. But what a glorious encounter! The humour, the nods to the traditional give and take, and oh, sweet gods, the way I can't tell which one wanted it more.
My line for this chapter, because I love your glorious sentences: "And then he felt it: hard and radiating a wet, predatory heat, the beast’s erection pressed into him as a deep, intent growl rolled through the room." Bam, right there, an image that just resonates so perfectly.
You. Are. Awesome.
This post is not constructive just appreciative of a nice story.
I think I am in love with this story. Utterly besotted, actually. It's as grim and wickedly delicious as fairy tales used to be, before we decided to cover everything in fairy dust and spun sugar.
Ansel is marvelous, so prickly and confident. He had a right to be confident, given what he has achieved, but this job might be a little more than anticipated. Then again, coming home is always fraught. The darkest nightmares happen in our own beds.
And so many gorgeous sentences! How do I choose? There's "It shimmered in the latticed moonlight that filtered through the treetops." But then there's "The little hunter was different from the others. In place of their arrogance, he carried a sadness. It wasn’t on his face as much as it just coloured the air around him. The hard-smelling hunters wore their confidence like a shield, but the little one carried his like an oath." Or "It was too dangerous on the ground with bloody meat all over the place, but he was seriously starting to rethink his career path.​​​​​​​" So many delicious words...
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Awwwwww he needs to feed that furry baby that saved him!!! More please!!!â¤