I would very much like to see a continuation of the story.
Please correct your disclaimer.
Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It needs to have a resemblance clause. We suggest this format and wording: Any resemblance to person(s) living or dead is purely coincidental.
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Thank you,
CL Mustafic, AFF Archive Moderator
Unless you were doing the bad translation kinda thing that pops up in manga, which would be cute if it weren't so annoying, you need to check your spelling, seriously, some of the words seem like if you typed out nonesense, the auto correct spat out something and you just didn't proofread and left it a that, so either proofread or pass it on to someone to do so.
That said I look forward to the next entry, just clean up a bit ok?