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for Way Down We Go

by Windstryke

person Amelia
schedule December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

:D Thanks for answering. The quick update was a real treat. I'll be sad whenthe pre written chapters are finished, but I'm already hooked so a week or two between chapters will be worth it.

 

My heart hurts for Milo. Poor boy. I'mwe got to see Nick's view. I like him more now that I have some insight into him. I'm a little excited that he's interested in hurt/comfort. Especially the comfort part. H/C is sexy.

I'm curious to know who Milo was being prepared for and how Seth died. 

person Peyton
schedule December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm eager to learn about Milo's training and why he wasn't given to the person he was trained for. I'm also glad nick appears to have a soft spot for Milo. Can't wait for the next update! 

person Anonymous
schedule December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Really enjoyed this first chapter! Please update again soon! =)

person Lavi1443
schedule December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

It was a very good first chapter. You write in a realistic way that is easy for me to understand and feel sympathy for your characters. I will make sure to follow the updates. 

person Adam
schedule December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm already attached to Milo. I love the concept and I'm interested in seeing how Nick deals with the lost of Seth and obtaining Milo.

person Anonymous
schedule December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

It is interesting to seethat Milo is used to. The humiliating and degrading way slaves are treated. Given his background it makes sense that he is proud to be a "good slave." It is sad though that he's being punished for his scars. I hope he can find some happiness with Nick. I wonder if he could ever get over his conditioning and see himself as a person. Though I assume it would be dangerous for him if he did.

 

Loving this story so far. 

person Peyton
schedule December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Good first chapter. I'm definitely interested to see what happens. 

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