Loved this, it was so cute <3 The relationship between Dale and Jarred feels so organic. Loved the scene where Jarred cleans his room for him. I wanted to buy Dale aaall the packs of underwear but of course, he'd consider that charity. Honestly, I kinda wanted to see them get into each other's pants though :P
-KassX
Enjoyed this story. Agree that Mike is a nerd and great that he did not feel pain.
Like that Tiff was a doctor in training. Reminds me of the statement that Liz was going to be training to be a doctor before the lastest set back with Sreve.
Like the small cliffhanger that Mike told Tiff that Santa had a surprise for her on Christmas Day.
Also like the way that you did get Santa in the story as the one who witnessed the attack on Mike and have Tiff a ride to Mike's on Christmas Eve.
Would like to see a second chapter to see what the lawyer does to the NYPD.
Is a great story and keep up the great story telling.
Oh yes. can definitly see the hoofprints ofm the dymanic duo here. Very nice story. Thankfully no cliffhanger just a well written story. Would ask for another chapter to see what the attorney did to the PD but would rather see another chapter of SITG.
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OMG DP, Naked girls in the snow? That's risking frostbite in some very sensitive areas LOL. Sweet story, I liked how Jarrod tried to understand how his friend felt.