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schedule December 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm really enjoying this story so far.  I'm interested to see how Rhys' and Jude's relationship develops. :)

person Adam
schedule December 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Loved the new chapter! I don't know whose POV I want more now. Lucilla (and what she knows and what she plans to do with it) or Jude (and all the angst)

schedule December 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter, way to get things going. Really curious to see how they are when next they're in the stables, or if Rhys even gies back, and how Lucilla uses this to her advantage.

person Anonymous
schedule December 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love that last chapter! 

person Adam
schedule December 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love seeing the different POVs! It is interesting to see how each of the character's think andhearing from their different viewpoints. I like how Jude knows his relationship with Luce is abusive and unhealthy. He understands that she hurts him for fun, but she is also his closest ally in his messed up world. I'm interested to see how Luce and Jude's relationship will change now that she has something he wants.

person Beth
schedule December 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Poor Rhys! How is he going to react now that he knows Jude and Lucilla are siblings!

BTW compared to the amazing quality of the story a little code  of no issue. 

 

schedule December 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Really enjoying this so far, loving the glimpses to Rhys' past, hope to get a fuller picture of it. Glad that Jude and Rhys are starting to interact.

person Angel
schedule December 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Nice story! Can't wait for more Jude & Rhys interaction. Hopefully soon!

person Anon
schedule November 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is so beautifully written and I'm so excited to see where this goes! Thanks for posting!

person Anon
schedule November 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm interested in seeing where this goes.