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by Alasdair-you

person Rose
schedule November 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Wow, love the frequent updates! And Bittersweet is bittersweet. And I have a feeling you're going to try to yank my heart out through my chest.

person Anonymous
schedule November 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Cyril and kinnon?

person CyArsonix
schedule November 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So part of me is hoping that the queen dies in childbirth, Em gets pregnant. And he, Nikita, Runa, child with queen (hoping it's a girl), and this baby of my imagination all live happily... as best as they can in this world... ever after.

person Anonymous
schedule November 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I will admit that I'm no longer rooting for Nikata/Emory; the way Nikata left really left me bitter (like Emory) I suppose. Cassie is growning on me, and I hope while Emory is getting a happy ending, that she doesn't get left behind.  

I love the fact this story seems to be flowing right now, with frequent updates. Thanks!

person Jess
schedule November 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You've got mail :)

 

person Jess
schedule November 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

10 years! 10 years away from Nikita and now married to a woman he doesn't love while she's having his child (it is his, right?) - GRR!

Okay with that being said, this is as heartbreaking as Fox's tale. At least in this story Emory knew why and where Kita was. Did it have to be so long? Poor Emory and no doubt poor Nikita. I really feel for them (which means you're doing a great job). Is it mean to have wanted them both to have been living alone until they got back together about 2 years (at the most )after the break up? 

How is Em handling his heats? Is Ataras son going to be like Fox and Emory? Reeling against the fact that he is sheltered and becoming the topic of installment 4 ;)

Any Cyril in this story? Any view points other then Emory? Do we get some flashbacks of how they have all been for the past 10 years? 

So many questions so MORE PLEASE NOW! 

person Jess
schedule November 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Part of why Nikita left was missing his family but for the last 10 years his sister has taken his place at the palace and I'm sure he doesnt visit often, if at all. So, was it worth it? I know it wasnt just his sister he was going to miss and I know a large part was honor but the question remains. Was it worth it?

BTW - It's nice to have Olivia back :)

person Anonymous
schedule November 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Interesting. Curious where this is going.