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by Alasdair-you

person Cyarsonix
schedule November 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ok I feel the need to specify when I say mofos I mean atara and them. And I feel for Cassie, I do but she needs to radically accept that Emory doesn't love her. And he prefers men and mainly his lover kita. And it's kind of like guys he can't have kids and it took forever for fox. So why would he even stay with Cassie. Atara is all butt hurt about it but come on she immaran it's not like she's a stranger to grin and bearing it. He's not the first king to screw someone else. He won't be the last. So they all need to sod off

 

Ps sorry for any autocorrects I'm on my phone

person Anonymous
schedule November 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Now that Nikita is healing, I hope he takes Emory to task to what he is doing to Cassie. She's being so gracious, but hurting, and all Emory is thinking about is Fox and Nikita. 

person Moku_Sui
schedule November 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So, if you ever plan on publishing, do let us know. I will buy everything.

person Eme
schedule November 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter! Yay I'm happy that Atara seems like he'll have a bigger role in this story then he has so far (though correct me if I'm wrong that's just what I inferred). I was bummed that we hadn't seen much of him yet in this installment and when we did he was either a grumpy grump or yelling at Nikita so not so much information to know how he's changed over 10 years! He really has a special place in my heart. I wouldn't say he's my favorite character, but he's definitely the one I most relate to and sometimes when you've written about his personality and how he's grown and matured I swear you were writing about me. Except I'm a girl. And not a halfling. Minor details. ;) Wonderful writing as always though, I'm excited to read more!

person Anonymous
schedule November 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Getting nervous in the next chapter. Emory has a chance at happiness, but I know it won't be that easy. Waiting for the ax to fall...

person Golden Tuna
schedule November 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Omg she's going to be reunited with her lost love!!! *swoon* Cassie has grown on me like crazy since she's taken over narration. I hope she gets a HEA :)

person Anonymous
schedule November 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

OMG WILL HER YOUNG LOVE SEBASTIAN MAKE AN APPEARANCE

person Ballardfam
schedule November 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh, I am so happy you didn't make Cassie a villain. I like her because she appears honest, with herself most of all. Kinda hoping her Sebastian will find his way to her. Looking forward to the next chapter and the discussion. Thanks.

person Anonymous
schedule November 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh, I love Cassie, and I love reading this chapter from her POV.  Thank you.

person CyArsonix
schedule November 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am hoping that Cassie and Kita get along. That they will consider themselves family, if not a bit dysfunctional. But they would put the fun is the word so that would be fun. I am also hoping that Emory allows Cass to take a lover of her own as he has Kita. And that perhaps it will be her Sebastian. Love reading her POV.

And Atara needs to fuck off, his outburst was uncalled for.