Beautiful
Loved the new chapter. I've hoped for Kita to help Emory with a heat since they fell in love. But I'm glad Nikita didn't do anything. I agree that Emory is more important and I hope that eventually Emory will desire Nikita to help him because he wants it and not just out od necessity.
I love how real your character's are. The internal dilemmas and physiological conflicts feel well thought out and researched. Thank you for taking the time to share your talent.
Love your story it always emotional and vividly exciting with both sadness and intense love. There nothing whimpy about story and it takes no prisoners! You should write for a living! Gslinger
Yay badass Sebastian and Atara!!! This is the first you've done on here of M/F right? Because you write it amazingly!
You really always make my day when one of your stories updates. I fall in love with all of your characters in minutes and you create such incredible depth in each of them even with switching off narrators.
Oooooo I'm liking Sebastian! I hope Cassie and Atara can convince him to go back with them quick and without them running into trouble! I'm worried about that bounty on Atara now and worried about Cassie too especially since Sebastian literally CAUGHT the knife that was hurtling toward him and was pretty expertly thrown :0 That shows how trained these people must be.
So the bounty on Atara is bigger than the bounty on Emory because if Atara died the Lierians have no leader and it would be "economically glorious" for the Immarans. But wouldn't it be extremely foolish to kill Atara? I feel like the backlash would be massive and not in the Immarans favor. First Cyril hasn't been out of power for too long, so wouldn't the tribes still be willing to listen to him as a leader? And even though Emory has recovered and is a great leader, he is still somewhat unstable and the death of his brother, one of the most important people in his life would destroy him and likely have him thirsty for revenge. I feel that if he were to die, the Immarans would have the wrath of both the Corians and the Lierians to face and they would risk being razed to the ground. Though I'm not a politics pro, perhaps there's far more to it.
:( Noooo! Sebastian!!!! I wish there was a way for him to go with her without anyone dying.
Yeah, not liking Sebastian. Cassie can do better than holding on to a old memory of a childhood sweetheart.
i don't get why he feels guilty like these mofos need to back up a step.