I keep leaving this story and coming back to it! I'm really surprised you haven't published it yet, better than many stories on Amazon!
Loved the chapter where he gave himself to Nakita, still wishing for a miracle that will allow them to have a baby? Maybe they make love before battle thinking it will be the last time together. They aren't able to get the birth control mixture and he conceived!
I'm new here. I have read the entire story within the past week and a half. I love the characters and the development of the story. I can't wait to read this story to competition. Thanks for the story, even if it made me want to cry to see Fox die. <3
I feel like we are so close to the end, but it's been a long time since the last update. Hopefully you just got busy and haven't forgotten to finish this one!
Good battle stuff...nearly as good as sex stuff LOL Gslinger
You write like a pro and always keep my attention, and make me want more!
Thank you for the update.
I will admit I kinda want Emory to have a pregnancy scare. And for Nikita and Atara to reconcile.
Hope you didn't give up on this story, for I was really looking forward to MORE??? Gslinger
Am I the only one that noticed it doesn't seem he took a morning after tonic...
You always make the sex believeable and real....it is a great skill don't stop!
I've been waiting for almost two books for this chapter. I wasn't disappointed. It was perfect. Thank you