What an extremely arousing story filled with hot werewolf sex
So was everyone in this story werewolves, or there are normal humans involved too?
Now that was different! Gives me an idea for our next Hallowe'en party!
Well, once again, you have taken a horror concept and somehow managed to not only sex it up, but do it with kids and in a such a well written way that it seems wholly believable. I salute you, good sir, and wish you a very spooky Halloween >;-)
your were-fan
Joma
This was a really cute story, and I loved the werewolf pups or is that what the pre-teen werewolves are called. Anyway I just want you to know that it was cute and I hope you continue to write more stories.
This was an especially fun little tale, and if only you could go the R.L. Stine route with this then we'd have a new Halloween classic movie to watch every year.
I loved the slow anticipation once it was clear exactly what kind of story this was. (One big benefit of proofreading. :)) It was delightful to get to know Emily and Joe Bob a little and realize that they had quite a pervy streak in them. They did a wonderful job guiding the children towards their instinctual wants and helping bring them out, much to everyone's pleasure. The descriptions of the games and the little things the children started doing were great, especially as it escalated.
For some reason the bit about the Velcro cracked me up almost as much as it did Emily. You did an excellent job describing all the lovely children and keeping the action straight among them. Naveen and June were an adorable exception to have going on too. Then it was nice that Emily and Joe Bob could enjoy the kids' down-time together after getting more than an eyeful of all the action.
Thanks for sharing this fun story.