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person Tahn
schedule November 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hehe, innocent girl indeed. Your Red Riding Hood is devious.

Also, I like pumkpin pie, but apple would bring me in over that any day.

schedule November 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ohhh, some fun ones this year...except sweater, that was sooo sad :( made me cry, meanie!

Ok, so I'm the designated review write for our little group. 

Sweater: I liked it but it made sense to me since I read Star Rebels and the spinoffs, but might be a little confusing to those who don't know the backstory. Good though, made me cry and Lizzie wanted to kick some snotty teen butts LOL, you made my girlfriend mad, thanks LOL

Polled: Alien politicians? Now that's scary, the human ones are bad enough LOL. 

Trick or Treat: Tahn, this was awesome, but I thought duct tape fixed everything LOL, Gotta love Zombies :) Didn't quite get it until the breakfast scene with the eye and toast then I was like "Say what?" Made Magus read the beginning again, just gotta say ewwwwwww :)

Pumpkin Spice: LOL, you sound like Magus "I don't want soy latte cranberry mocha carmel crap! Why can't I just get a cup of coffee?" Now he's like, "Why don't you smell like apple pie?" Thanks Bronx :P Had us fooled too, we thought she was an alien after reading polled LOL

person Tahn
schedule October 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oooo, the aliens are a nice touch.. Good and creepy, well done.