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for Torturing Tayla

by archon1980

person Kyle Chandler
schedule December 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

More please!

person Anonymous
schedule November 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh man it looks like poor Tayla is in for a world of pain lol. i bet she wont see it coming. update soon cant waitvisitors newent

person Anonymous
schedule November 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yikes, no Tayla, me thinks you are right and whatever they have planned for you doesn't bode well for you. Should I be nervous myself. Well, I shall wait and see what Amy and Matt have planned for their little red haired, cock slut slave. 

person Anonymous
schedule November 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Um, hi, it's me again and I am in a good mood since it's Thanksgiving so have decided I will continue to read as well as review the chapters you post. 

 

This is getting even better and I love what they are doing to Tayla. Haha she deserves it for dumping him years ago. I like the girlfriend is involved in her torture too. So looking forward to seeing what happens next chapter. 

So, please consider using beastality in future chapters too. We can't have Tayla get to complacent... giggles. The more variety of animals the better, lol. 

Since this is not really happing, thank goodness, think of all the fun you as an author can have with Tayla.

Smirks and chuckles evilly......

 

person Anonymous
schedule November 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am done with reviewing since you quit updating story. i may read but not gonna take time to leave you anymore reviews since you cant find time to cobtinue story.

person Anonymous
schedule October 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Can you please write longer chapters or update more often to nake up for the short chapters? If you havent read these stories on AFF, check them out, kennel Club by DragonSong and The Late Appointment by Platinum Magic .

person Anonymous
schedule October 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So, since Halloween is coming upon us here is an idea! Write a chapter featuring Tala being tormented, abused and used in all ways by her new Master's friends at a special Halloween themed party where she is guestbof honor, lol.

person Anonymous
schedule October 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh nice twist with ex boyfriend and his friend Amy. cant wait till they get to new destination and what happens next to Tayla. things are gonna start to get more interesting for herclisr pecan

person Daqueenbee
schedule October 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Excellent cliffhanger, husband's boss???

person Anonymous
schedule October 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

An ex boyfriend, cousin or brother? Nice cliffy.