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for Torturing Tayla

by archon1980

person Kyle Chandler
schedule December 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I hope you know these cliffhangers are torturing me more than Tayla's tormentors are her.

person Anonymous
schedule December 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

What about them using something called the pear of anguish on Tayla?

person Anonymous
schedule December 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh dude! You literally made my day! 2 updates within a day is so super awesome of you! 

Anyhoo, haha, well Amy had warned Tayla she would remove her clit and man did she ever! 

I can't wait to see how Tayla reacts after she wakes up.

Thanks for the longer chapter too. I hope you can keep plugging them out and come up with more ways for them to torture her.

Tayla reminds me of a girl in High School who though she was God's gift to the boys. I hated her she was so stuck up.

 

 

person Anonymous
schedule December 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh, and thank you for giving me the cherry on top literally with Tayla''s clit, lol. I loved it. She deserved it for biting Amy. Oh and loved how they fed her too.

person Anonymous
schedule December 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh heck yeah i am totally addicted to this and think she should be made into a human cow and that all her holes are kept filled to the brim with cum and that they tattoo her entire body with some degrading design so should she ever be let go no one would want her and she would have to live as a recluse or join a circus.

person Kyle Chandler
schedule December 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Intense chapter. If you intend to have them eventually kill her, please add tag for it. I would rather they not but was wondering about it. I don't know but assume they could just sell her to someone else once they tire of her. I would think they would enjoy knowing her suffering would continue.

person Anonymous
schedule December 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hey, if Tayla won't be subject to rape by animals then how about making her into one? like a cat, dog, cow, pig or any other animal. they could sew or could dontheir own surgery and become creative.

person Anonymous
schedule December 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

My review messed up. they could sew or staple things on her body themselves to make her look like an animal of some kind. or do surgery.  they could cut the tendons in her ankles so she cant stand or walk and do something to her vocal cords so she cant speak only make noises. i dont know why but enjoy seeing them torture her, lol. its fun reading cause its not real just fantasy.

person Dante
schedule December 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Gah, how could you stop it there?!! I wish chapters were a bit longer or you could update quicker but know real life takes priority. Are you allowed to mention names of other sites you post stories on? In regards to using animals to torture Tayla, this site allows it so can you consider adding it only here. Just a thought for those who enjoy reading stories with it but not my cup of tea just a suggestion for those who might want her to be tortured that way.

person Anonymous
schedule December 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh no, cliffhanger , please update soon! You really had me for a moment and thought her husband was there to rescue her. I do hope her torture continues. Have you considered them using midevil tortue devices on her?