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for Torturing Tayla

by archon1980

person Anonymous
schedule December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I would love to see her tortured in many painful and various ways. If this turns out with a snuff ending, then please make her torment long and painful as punishment of Tayla leading Matt on then dumping him. I am keeping my fingers crossed you don't end up killing her because I think giving her a life of pain, degradation  and  humility is better way to prolong her misery. Why give her a break by ending her life and stop her suffering. She would be getting off too easy. I hope there are more scenes like the one where she us raped in every hole and they use different toys to abuse her with. Lol, i am evil! Poor Tayla.

person Anonymous
schedule December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hey Dude! Please post another chapter soon I am craving to find out what kind of torture Matt and Amy put Tayla through next. 

person Anonymous
schedule December 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

What about some sort of rope torture, or use rubber restraints on various parts of her body. Splay her out wide on stakes in ground,. Bury her in sand

Stick a huge ring in her tongue so she can't speak only drool. Have her dragged by a horse or car or motorcycle over something painful.she shouldnt ever be allowed to stand either only crawl.

person Slut Lover
schedule December 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I want them to torture her breasts more and maybe they could brand her tongue in a way that she can't talk anymore. Use chains with spikes and attach from her nipples to anus. I love the electric shock type torture so hope you can come up with more inventive ways to use them on her.

person Anonymous
schedule December 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I hope they have more guests and parties with other various ways to torture her. I have been reading other stories on the two other sites I found this one one and there are beastality ones. In case, you decide to add animals to her degradation.

person SlapNuts
schedule December 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Entertaining and addictive too. The guy who originally abducted and trained her was actually more human than her new Master and Mistress.

person Anonymous
schedule December 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ouch, that had to be painful. Well, she sort of asked for it when she bit Amy like did she really think theybwpuld have let her get away with it. But still, the pain of it must have been excruciating and now she is mutilated beyond repair and no going back. I definitely dont think her hubby would want her now thats for sure. Gross. Her owners are sick and twisted.

person Anonymous
schedule December 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I found the other website you post this story on and saw the poll about Tayla. I vote to let her live only because where is the fun ending her torment and lettering her off the hook for dumping her ex. He did pay alot of money for her. Why doesn't he just sell her to Amy in the end? Then Tayla would beg to be killed. I think that's a fate worse than death. I hope you reconsider snuffing her off.

person Anonymous
schedule December 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I must admit how I much I love Matt and Amy's ingenious plans forTayla's torture.  I get excited waiting to see what they come up with next for the poor redhead. Um, they might better feed her something before she starves to death and they lose their plaything, even if it's cum, turd, (human or animal variety for both of these) or that slop they feed to pigs. It seems you update weekly which is fine since you haven't left Tayla and her Master & Mistress hanging too long but would you please make chapters a tad bit longer, pretty please, with a cherry on top of Tayla's clit.

person Anonymous
schedule December 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh, I am confused a bit. Didn't Tayla have a gag in her mouth? Or did they take it out when she was put in water tank? I was just wondering why Matt even allowed her to speak or that he gave her a choice like he did. No big deal just wondering why he even gave her a choice about it.