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for Torturing Tayla

by archon1980

person Anonymous
schedule December 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh crap, that Amy is a nasty bitch and you just got to love her. She really is getting off on all the dirty stuff they doing to Tayla. I wish they would make Tayla eat all types of animal shit and cum too. How gross would that be for Tayla.

person Hades
schedule December 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am enjoying this story way too much, lol.  Yup, Tayla is sure all these “Fucking bitch, ho, whore, slut, cunt, dogfucker, skank…” I would love to see a Neopolitan Mastiff make her his bitch, lol.

person Anonymous
schedule December 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

What?! Seriously, you ended it with another cliffhanger of doom!!!!

How am I going to make it another week without finding out what Amy has planned for Tayla in the loft?! 

Shit! Where is Matt while all this is going on?!

Oh crap, my brain is in active overdrive trying to imagine what Tayla saw in the loft.

I wouldn't think Amy would be so brazen as to actually terminate Tayla without Matt's approval.

Tayla is pretty sick in the head herself for actually having enjoyed that kiss with Amy. Especially, when she thought shevwas going to hang her.

person Anonymous
schedule December 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Will Matt find out what Amy is planning on doing with Tayla and come to her 'rescue' or part take in the poor girl's torture... whatever it turns out to be. Shit..... i need to know what's in that damn loft..... and I need to know before the not knowing gives me a damn nose bleed, lol. Please suprise us with a double whammy new update.....

person Anonymous
schedule December 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Seriously! Matt apologized to Tayla! What the heck is wrong with him! 

Loved the rape scene just wish it were longer and they used other things on her.

I was wondering why Tayla wasn't in severe pain from her 'surgery' and the cauterizing. 

Anyhoo, good chapter. Happy you finally updated even though chapters are very short and updates take awhile. I get it. Real life sucks. Hope you feel better soon and happy holiday. Hoping to see more of the perils of Tayla in the New Year.

Cheers!

 

person SlapNuts
schedule December 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am really depressed after reading your message because everytime i get addicted to a story and take the time to review every new chapter then author disappears and their story is never continued. I have been waiting two years on some I followed. I think I will wait until this one is complete before reading/reviewing the rest. 

person Kyle Chandler
schedule December 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Good chapter. I wish I could find myself having sympathy for Tayla but am enjoying her torment too much to feel sorry for her. Is Matt having second thoughts on how they are treating their sex slave? Amy seems to be in contol of him would like to see Matt turn her into a slave as well. That would be a nice twist and he would have two slaves instead of one.

person Anonymous
schedule December 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am in excruciating pain even more so than Tayla waiting to find out what evil plans they have in store for her next. I know you are busy with real life but please don't leave Tayla hanging too much longer.

person Anonymous
schedule December 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

As I am sitting here eating my lunch on break, I just thought of a horrendous way to torture Tayla even more! They could sell her to a meat factory farm where they harvest human organs, and body parts, and take Tayla apart piece by piece very slowly so that she doesn't die but becomes a living corpse of sorts....... she would still have her mind and know what's going on... and feel pain but can't communicate.... Me bad.... I never, ever, would condone anything of this sort but it's Tayla so she deserves to suffer in the worse way.... chuckles evily and sneaks away to hide under desk.

person Hades
schedule December 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I want her to be a cum dumpster and they should keep all her holes plugged to keep it in so she is full at all times. That Amy is a bad ass Bitch, I like her! Matt should sell Tayla to her and then when Amy tires of her she can sell her to a whorehouse overseas in another country where she can  face even more degrading stuff.