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for Torturing Tayla

by archon1980

schedule July 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Do you post stories on any other sites besides this one? If you do, could you please give link to them on your profile page.

person Anonymous
schedule January 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the update!

person Anonymous
schedule January 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow! More please!

person Anonymous
schedule December 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh my gosh! What a twist! Well, Amy needed to be put out of her misery, lol. She was just too crazy and Matt had to act fast to save Tayla. Oops, he didn't actually save her, hahaha. Breaking her thumbs, ouch, that had to hurt like hell. Again, my only fault with story are the too short chapters otherwise loving Tayla's ongoing journey into hell.

person Kyle Chandler
schedule December 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Happy New Year!

I am so happy Matt blew out Amy's brains and she didn't even see it coming! That Bitch certainly deserved it.

So, I am assuming he will he using those scorpions on Tayla but in what way?!

I hope her torture continues for many more chapters. I will hate to see it eventually end but as the saying goes "all good things must come to an end". The only thing is I don't know how Tayla's 'life' will end.................

A depraved part of me wants Tayla's torture to continue and for Matt not to exterminate her in the end. 

 

 

 

 

person Hades
schedule December 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hot Damn! I didn't see that coming (and apparently neither did Amy) but holy hell that skank sure did ask for it. I won't miss her and am relieved it's just Matt and Tayla as it should be. Now, he can get back to business without worrying about Amy. I think Tayla's torment is only going to get better. Well, maybe for us readers not so much for poor innocent, or not so innocent  anymore Tayla. Any chance, you could update again for New Year's like have a special party featuring Tayla as the main guest of honor.

person Anonymouse
schedule December 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

HOT DAMN! 

person Slut Lover
schedule December 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

 “I’m gonna’ make you wish I’d letcha’ hang bitch.”

Gah!

That Amy is one sick wacko and I am loving this story so much because of her!

 

 

person Kyle Chandler
schedule December 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Disgusting chapter, for Tayla anyway. I think Matt needs to get Amy under control before she loses it completely. Hey, maybe he will have enough of his girlfriend and get rid of her but keep Tayla for his own sick and twisted pleasure. How could Amy even go anywhere near Tayla's face with her mouth knowing it had been in all that cum, piss and shit. That's just plain sick. I wonder whether Amy really was planning on killing her or just playing with her mind. I really want the next chapter to be long and very detailed with whatever Amy is going to do with Tayla.

person Hades
schedule December 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh man, you are pure evil but I am loving it and its a testament to your writing.