I really like this story and the characters. It's well written and I look forward to the next chapter.
great two chapters!!! I really liked them!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!
Nice new story!!! I like the start of this!!!! Does this story mean we dont get to see more updates of Parallel or will you update both? See you again soon!!!
Ooo, this sounds very interesting. I like the characters and their attitudes, can't wait to see where this one goes. It's not gonna kill my heart like BitA is it? Just need a warning so I can get the glue to put it back together again. Best of luck with your writing ^_^
You've got me intrigued. I like the voice of Valentine, and your world building is great! Keep up the good work. I look forward to chapter two. :)
Looks really good and promising, I hope to read more of it soon.