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by Alasdair-you

person smint45
schedule March 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god a double update!!!! You made me so happy I totally love those two chapters and it is even more amazing that they will go to meet fin!!!! So can't wait I really hope that you will update again really soon!!!! See you!!!

person wolfluv
schedule March 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ONCE AGAIN WOW! You could feel the tension in that jeep! SO is the first feeling Val going to feel going to be "jealous or envy"?  OH and when Laz took his memories did he take Val's feelings as well?  I mean when he took the memories away of his Dad trying to comfort him and such would that not have been the begriming of his first true feelings after coming away from being feral?  There moments I wanna yell at Val for the way he treats Rem but I get it he wants to learn which is Awesome!  OH OH OH I wonder if Fin is going to help in that lil equation?  Doesn't Rem have to be there for Fin to fix him?  OR is he going to hang with Ev and Val and go back with them?  OH and MY GOODNESS LESS NOT FORGET RENA that is going to be a ball buster if I've ever read one!!!!!  Still loving the names by the way!  THANK YOU FOR SHARING ONCE AGAIN!!!!!  Till next time!

person wolfluv
schedule March 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

WOW JUST FUCKING WOW! I love it when you connect other people from other stories together like this!  You make your characters SO believable that when you read they are going to meet  you're like HELL YEAH!  I love the fact that Remi might just get a second chance at being in Val's life but I also know Ev might have a HUGE choice to make at some point....  THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR WONDERFUL WORKS WITH US! THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATES AS WELL!!!  Read you when you get a chance!

person Ishtani
schedule November 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I came here after reading your three part story. And I love this too! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

person Lavi
schedule October 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Val is so cute *sobs* I'm so angry that the world is such a shitty place and those monsters treat him like a thing. It was a couple of awesome chapters, keep doing such a good job on the story. 

person smint45
schedule October 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh that was terribel!!! Although I understand Lazarus sentiment I also can feel for Valentines pain!!!! Poor guy I hope evrett will help him calm down!!! And I'm glad that there is a possibility to help remi!!! See you again soon!!!

person smint45
schedule October 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh that chapter was sooo sweet!!!! I really adore Evrett!!!! And i so can't wait for the lessons in emotions^^ The End of the chapter was just so fluffy!!! I really liked it!!! They are soo sweet together!!!!

person smint45
schedule October 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That you for hte review response^^ And You are right he really has a selfloathing problem^^ Can't wait for Abraxus to fix that^^ I so can't wait for the sparring in the next chapter^^ I really liked the siren twins^^ Hope we see them again!!! Thanka a lot for the chapter and see you again soon!!!

person Lavi
schedule October 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Val is so precious. I hope Eve would manage to take him out of his shell. Val is so kind, and he doesn't even realise ehy people come to like him. His lack of feelingsake him seem vulnerable and pure for some reason, but his dark background and facts of life condradict to his innocence and make him mature.  

person smint45
schedule October 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That chapter was absoutly amazing!!! I really love those two!!! And I hope valentine will someday be able to love him back!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!