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for Lisa

by archon1980

person RESCUE25
schedule September 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Interesting start but way too short.

 

 

person Anonymous
schedule August 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I wouldnm't exactly call this a "story".  There's almost nothing to it and barely any sexual act mentioned.  Take some time, build it up: give Lisa her reason for cheating on her husband, show us a little more character, make a description!