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I find myself checking the site 2 or 3 times a day for updates of your story...
Thats is disturbing - i don't usually do that! No, really, it's all your fault! It's because you update so often and that gets my hopes up that maybe you found time to post another bit of the story. And then right when i start calming down a bit, there it is: chapter 12! The story just keeps getting better, please, pretty pretty please keep going. You got me all excited for the next part. It's like finding presents infront of the doorstep when you open the door.
That was a freakin great chapter I wish it was long but hey keep up the great work
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Okay, that chapter 10 ending was the most haunting thing I've read in a long time. I've seen quite a few kidnap stories like this on AFF but your is actualy interesting and GOOD! Also, the setting is literally in my neck of the woods so to speak, so the part where they're transporting Bryson was freaky for me to read. Keep writing, you've got an awesome story going! I can't wait to see what happens next!
I'm really getting into this story. I feel like somebody has to be an undercover cop... Maybe Quinten? You really put a lot of excitement and emotion into this. I can't wait to see what happens next! My only suggestion is to use contractions whenever possible. It makes it another for me to read. Very good story, though. Xoxo Robin
Omg I love this story I can't wait to see what happens next poor poor puppy
Dang, I thought his pucks as changing. It's good to see that he has people on his side......well......kind of. Hopefully they won't turn on him. Enjoying the story so far, keep it up and I'll keep reading.
*That was suppose to say, I thought his luck was changing.
I am already addicted and hope there is an eventual happy ending for Bryson and that these three criminals get what's coming to them. Thanks for sharing and looking forward to more of your story. If you haven't read Waiting in the Throes by MaddoxGrey right here on this site, be sure to check it out.