Oh Tyler's in for a fight now! I want Tyler to win. Elliott should have kept hold of Rick if he meant to keep him. I love this story! Xoxo Robin
Oh my goodness, I want more. Xoxo Robin
This was a steamy story for sure! Very enjoyable read. Love how the story ended and I hope E gets his man back in the near future. Rick has some making up to do though. Please share a new story soon! xxx
I really enjoyed this story, there was more to this one than your others (but I really like those too). But I kind of wished there had been a bit more story. I kept expecting another interaction with Hank, just to see how he dealt with what happened.
I also feel bad for Tyler, in some ways, I'm glad he's away from Rick, he might be able to get into a better sm relationship. But at the same time I really don't like how Elliott got in the middle and forced the issue. Though I can totally understand why Elliott did it. Just have to wonder if when Elliott goes to college he'll go through the same thing and meeting others.
I also like the parallel between Rick and his father. Rick had said before how Mickey was the one in charge, and seems like Elliott is the same way.
OMG I love your writing, and honestly you perfectly capture the relationship, feelings and dilemma of the abuse slut. I can't tell you how hard the line is of wanting your Dom to fall for you, but also freaking punish you like they don't even care about you. But I may not have to say it because it's perfect here!
Also screw Elliot, Tyler is awesome and should keep Rick, good luck Tyler!!!
(little imma princess good girl sweet talking Elliot...grumble grumble)
This is an evil place to stop a story.
You know what would be really funny is if Rick found out what Elliot was up to before Tyler leaves!
I hope that Rick finds out what Elliot's doing an uses Tyler to punish him for it, that would be so hot!
Team Rick and Elliott all the way!!!!!!!!!
Don't know how I feel about that ending lol... I liked Tyler and Rick together