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person Anon
schedule October 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm pretty sure I don't want to know what the witch was in the middle of, and I have the most bizarre visual of poor Corny's waking vision. Great hairy gods on pogo sticks, my brain will never be clean again... :D

Anyway, unicorn society sounds a bit too elitist for me, so Corny needs to find a way to get back to Drake. And help the gem troll. I've decided I like the gem troll. (This is not a surprise, surely, since all dragons adore gems.) So, on with Corny's half-assed stupid plan! :D

person Tahn
schedule September 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh dear, what was the witch in the middle of I wonder?

person Anon
schedule July 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Argh, cliffhangers! I'm inundated with cliffhangers! Evil writers around here, I'm telling you.

So, this elf looks to be up to no damned good, and the trolls found the explosives, eh? Just shiggles all around... and the elf had better watch himself around Alita. I have a feeling her cranky carries a whallop.

I'm really enjoying this one, so more please? (And see, the old hag left a review! :P )

person Tahn
schedule July 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hey! I resemble that remark! :P Besides, you are just as crazy as I am.

 

 

person Anonymous
schedule July 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm really loving where this story is going! The witch is great for and laugh and I get the feeling that I am really going to like Corny :) 

person Anon
schedule July 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

::smacks pouty author:: I've been busy, dammit. It's not like the lair doesn't need cleaning, or the wyrmlings don't want feeding. And don't get me started on my mate. ::grumbles and smokes irritably::

Reviews, eh? The witch wants reviews? Well, despite her insistence on looking like a Disney trope, she weaves a damned good tale. It would serve humans right if they lost their supremacy, and I'm sure they wouldn't be missed at all, especially the half troll who thinks it can be the leader of the free world. A little political commentary there, and well done. :D

So far, I'm betting on the eggs holding the collective highest intellect... :D

person Anon
schedule July 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

And because I won't cheat and just leave one review for two chapters... :P

I like Cornelius, and Drake, too. Alita is a cranky little thing, and she's sort of growing on me, a bit. The witch, however, is fucking brilliant, and her tormenting of You is nothing short of delicious. But yes, a unicorn with dreads and a dragon lover? Nothing better in the world. No wonder that dick Sterling has to mess it up for poor Cornelius. I'm hoping Drake goes to visit the one that stole his Cornelius, but I tend to root for dragons eating things a bit much.

Anyway, it's absolutely wonderful, and perfect summertime entertainment, so stop pouting and write! :D

person Tahn
schedule July 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

It made me sad when Cor had to leave Drake. You can tell they love each other. I hope it all works out.I love the whole witch and reader interaction thing you have going on, it's funny.

person Anonymous
schedule July 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hello nice witch lady:) This story is awesome! I love all the little details...and I really hope Willy is okay. Cant wait for more so please update soon! ♥

person Tahn
schedule July 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I can't believe you actually went through with this story, but I'm proud of you. Stepping out of the box and lighting it on fire to boot. Way to go :D I can't wait for more.

And to the witch: I reviewed I swear lady! *cowers* Don't turn me into a toad!