We have similar approaches where we focus on a more screenwriting style, direct and minimally descriptive with little exposition. You reveal the circumstances and setting through the action and dialogue, which I enjoy. However, I did find myself wishing for more reflective moments - to see Jeff's thoughts and feelings, so I could connect with him better and get a better sense of the environment he is growing up in. The idea of approaching sexuality from a naive perspective is clever. I don't much care for pissing, but dicks and tits everywhere is never a bad thing.
Your mention of the St. Louis arches at the beginning. It reminded me of Defiance and I wondered if that was intentional. I imagine you may be a fan of that show.
Also, Verna is my favorite. :]
The story is well written--living hidden from a dictatorship, filtered through the rapidly less innocent and naive eyes of an eight year old boy. Even through the eyes and ears of Jeffery, one can hear the jackboots marching up the drive. It is a chilling yet compelling read.
Now what was he going to do his sister? Kari has some ideas LOL