I just binge read the 1 to 7th chapter. I want tomention how well written this story is. The descriptions make the feel real without distracting from the plot and action.
It is refreshing to see characters who aren't cliche and predictable while still being believable. They're well rounded and act realistically. The dialogue is also well done.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Thank you for undating I love this story. Especially Frau though I can't tell what he's going to do next though I like how he has claimed Cole as his own in a sense. Can't wait to see what Frau will do next especially as Frau seems to be able to learn very fast. Will he take control with the next sexual encounter and make Cole beg instead that would be great.
Hum, I don't know if Frau is a sociopath but he's really 'borderline'.
Thanks for the new chapter ! :) I like your story.
miles
uterly delightful. so savage and sweet at the same time. love how he tore up that bacon lol. i get the feeling they met before when he was a child maybe.
Ending the chapter so abruptly is just plain cruel. :'(
This chapter has a everything: it spams across some significant episodes with well executed time skips, it has plenty of Cole-Frau interaction but introduces other nice, easy-going, endearing and enjoyable characters, the dialogues are witty, fun and informative. I love how you write and you write so well that the chapters seems too short :))
It was nice to see this intelligent but somewhat awkward 'teeneger' Frau. Some well introduced unanswered questions picked interest about his past and make Frau more mysterious: military connections, Morgan's nephew, bad experience with teachers, unusual behaviour..
But how will this boy transform again in the overconfident young man from the first chapter?
Can't wait to read more! Thanks for sharing :))
Their first meeting... It went well lol ! It's like Frau smelt him. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
I don't know what to think of those girls. They're seem 'hyper'. Like they don't have enough distractions and Cole is the new toy ! :)
Please, update soon...
Usually I don't review simply because I tend to read fiction stories on my mobile phone. But I believe you deserve the acknowledgement that is your story is good and some encouragement :)
It was a bit cruel to cut the chapter as you did. I imagine you know that here everybody is intrigued by Frau and can't wait to know more about him, see more of the interaction between Frau and Cole. That first chapter just wet our appetite. Overall this last chapter was a bit of a filler, albeit a necessary one. I understand that you had to describe at least a little bit the new environment. I liked a lot how you inserted the first encounter of Frau and the first impression Cole has of Frau. Also I liked how Frau expressed dislike and disregard towards Cole because now I'm eager to know what made him change his mind. I like the writing style, too. Hope to read more soon. :))
Myrt
Good to know his past. And the begining of the story.
I like his feisty and acerbic personality. :)
Welcome back !
Promising first chapter. Waiting for more :)
Thanks for the explanations about 'The Union' and Cole's past. It helps.
How old is Frau ? Cole ?