Amazing work. I love the vocabulary used and it contains all of my favorite fetihes. Absolutely loved it!
Loved Ch.1, but kinda wished he actually choked her with his cock. Would love to see a sequel describing what happens in the house. Keep up the good work.
I really enjoyed your side stories and would like to read some more especially the continuation of cris and link arc. Also, I noticed the Zelda and link Easter egg. I didn't expect NTR at the start of the first chapter lol oh man I felt real bad inside.
Okay that was funny and hot in one. Great and interesting Characters. Really had fun with that one.
Totally in for more.