This was awesome everything about it was awesome, will there be a sequel or could I make a story request and you put in this level of smut in it, I have the same pen name on fanfiction.net
You used the word 'slut' so many times, it lost meaning to me within two sentences. The word 'slut' is a noun and cannot be overlooked in the same way like 'said'. The english language is not designed to ignore nouns. So while reading this, all it felt like to me was,
SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUTSLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT adjective, pronoun, SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT SLUT adverb SLUT SLUT
That shit is annoying. You need to rework this and rid of 90% of times the character says 'slut' otherwise this is unreadble.