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I'm really enjoying your story.

I am going to start with a disclaimer. I don't normally read hetero stories. So the fact that I am here reading this should tell you something about it. I love it. I keep like imagining her having the backbone and slapping him. Like don't lie to her. He can screw around but have the tact to not wind up on Instagram. But don't piss on her and call it rain. Also curious, because I don't know where this story is headed and where it will end. Will there be a pregnancy tag later? Since they will be married eventually because I would be interested in that. I really do like the story and I will keep reading. :)

I reread this chapter now that I am more awake and alert and god I hate the whore. I don't care who she is but she needs to be taken out like yesterday. I am sorry but I already ship the main pairing and she's some whore. What if she decides she wants to trick him into fathering a kid or something... I mean come on this bitch has to go. *grabs spork*

Great story so far. I love mafia's story :) Poor Alex ! No chance for him !

Excellent story. At first I Was not going to read it but I am glad I decided to read it because it is really good. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Very good. I hope we continue to see more of her personality. I like that she's developing a back bone. I wouldn't want to see her become any kind of doormat. I feel the only way she's going to get any respect from Anthony, is by standing up for herself. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I really liked this first chapter, very promising and i hope the second chapter will be posted soon.

Great start! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great start! I'm hooked!

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