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for New York Mob Princess

by xoxoxo

schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I do not like Alex. Reading that was like, boy what are you planning... I don't trust anyone. With the rape tag I am like, who is what.... I don't trust Adonis, I don't trust Marcello, I don't trust Alex. I would love to say I don't trust Anthony but well I don't think it matters if I trust him cus well he's the hubby to be. It's everyone else I don't trust... like OMG. So many theories going on in my head. He needs to see her more often and she should totally kiss him first cus well then that is on her terms and not his. And I love quick updates. Again I don't normally read hetero so the thing with Alex just really freaked me out cus he's not the shipping I like in this. LOL So I admit to being biased.
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
p.s. If you would love to hear any of my really bizarre theories or other input that I don't put into the reviews feel free to email me at deadxpleasuresx@aim.com You said to drop you a line if someone wants you to read their stories, but I just want to rant about my theories and all that fun stuff. In the meantime I will have an obsession with this.
person Jess
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing!
person Ky
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter, particularly the interaction between Anthony and Isabella. I hope to see another chapter (and more Anthony-Isabella action!) Soon!
person Anon
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. 10/10 would recommend
person miles
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I like the new chapter even if I find the bath scene a little OOC. Anthony is really scary but his brother is bad news ! I see problems in the futur.
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I don't want her like Anthony yet.
person Shelley
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting concept and well written. I look forward to reading your entire story and I already think that Isabella is an awesome character to put up with the likes of Anthony for the sake of the family. Let's see how she does as he get older. Shelley
person Shelley
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story. You have kept up the excitement and anticipation of Isabella's trials and tribulations in her everyday life and I feel her anger and frustration of a life unlived. I am so excited and thrilled to be able to continue reading such an awesome story.
person Shelley
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Things are heating up for Isabella. I wonder what this next year will bring for both of them. Still love your writing and your unfolding story and the character development you are creating for them