rate_review Reviews

wow okay. I didnt actually thought this would happen :D good writing so far, Im especially curious now how Isabella will deal with her rape now for the next year. I had actually thought this story will only pick up after Isabella turns 19, I guess I was wrong! Keep up the good work and Im definitely looking forward to your next installment! Cheers

Of course he can't love her. He's 10 years older and she is a child. A mature one but a child all the same ! I'm afraid he will never love her... :( I just hope you like 'happy ending' because it's going to be very sad... ^^' Waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

I'm enjoying this story lot. I really don't have any criticism, which is rare for me. It kind of kills me that it's still such a long time before they get married, but I'l try to be patient. I do like how you are building up their relationship over a long period of time though, it's interesting.

Love the story, would love to see Isabella rebelling more like a teenager. She should be raising all kind of hells.231

Hey! I think the story is going great. I'm totally hooked. And your editing seems good to me!

Wow that last phone call had me pissed off to, but whats a girl to do. cant wait to see

Love this!

I am loving this. It's my favourite ongoing story on the site at the moment and I will keep looking for updates. I think she's great and he's a mystery. I say fast forward a year, get sexy, some infatuation and angst and you have yourself an absolute classic. What a great start. Xx

I'm really enjoying the story so far. It's well written and the pacing of the plot is just right, in my opinion. Isabella is a likeable protagonist. She's intelligent and also relatable in that she isn't perfect and is young enough to be a bit naive. I like how you've emphasised the difference in roles between the male and female characters. They live alongside each other but in separate spheres. My second favourite character at the moment is Sophia. I liked how she was Isabella's partner in crime when she snuck away to go the pool party. Also like Armando. He really cares for Isabella but isn't allowed to show it much. Jury's still out on Anthony. He's certainly an interesting character but I don't trust him yet. He seems to have seduced Isabella but he has so much more experience than her and it remains to be seen whether he genuinely likes her or he's just being manipulative. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great story line can't wait for more !