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for New York Mob Princess

by xoxoxo

person MonaMina
schedule July 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god I have been waiting for your return!!! I love this story and I want an Anthony Romaro for myself! Goddamn he's hot! I can't believe he was at the wedding. I knew something was going to happen...But dayum! So fucking good! Please please please can I have some more❤️

person Athenaa
schedule July 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

My reviews do not seem to be showing up. Hopefully this one will...I just wanted to say how excited I am that this story is back and that I love where you're going with it. I have no idea what is going on or what's going to happen next so it's all very thrilling and I can't wait for the next chapter!

schedule July 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am sooo glad your back I love this story. Im really excited to see how this all plays out! Was her brother killed? What about Sophia?? Ever since it was revealed that she was to be married off to the the Russians I sorta had a hunch that she'd end up dead but probably by her new husband. Im also curious as to how Isabella & Anthony's relationship will play out. Did he have the necklace bugged or something ??

person JessieG
schedule July 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So glad you're back! Was her necklace bugged? I'm kind of enjoying this side of Anthony. More please! (Can you turn on reviews from non members - right now you need to log in to leave a review)

person Sekre
schedule July 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Aw I really liked this chapter!

person NotAnon
schedule July 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm sorry to hear you're losing inspiration but please don't stop writing this story. It's literally the best story I've read in a couple years. I don't think Anthony was too sweet in this chapter lol. To me, he seemed like he might be sociopathic rather than evil so I didn't feel like it was out of character for him to be nice. I also like the idea of her running away and Anthony tracking her down, maybe she runs away in fear after Anthony finds out about her cousin's marriage bc she thinks he'll be angry for not telling him? 

schedule July 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I feel like he has some crazy ultirior motive that is going to crush her. Bungie jumping was a cool touch. I hate how she is in love with him, but I get it. Gah, emotions suck. Amazing chapter!
schedule June 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
my god i spent all week thinking about how this could pan out. thank you soo much for the update! maybe bella can call a hit on maya? that'd be great. have her sister in law or cousin's fiance arrange it? lol wicked great story. keep it up
schedule June 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
First, all I wanted to say is I absolutely love this story! It's so unique in its own way and I love seeing things from Isabella who is a very relatable character. Now, as for this recent chapter, it seems like you're making it your job to make me tear up ;P for some reason I relate with Isabella so much and I seriously want her to beat Maya's ass (pardon my French). It makes me so sad to see how hopeless she is and how badly Anthony treats her. I hope she's thrown a lifeline soon because I couldn't stand it if she loses her spirit. Great job with this story and chapter. Keep up the great work!
schedule June 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
aaaaah nice chapter. I think this one was stronger than the last one. Good writing as always, just some minor grammatical mistakes, but I'm nitpicking here ;) Im curious how the story will progress. I just dont get it, why Isabella still wants to marry that guy....but well ^^ hope she will turn out as a strong character. Keep up the good work and looking forward to your next installment. Cheers Jen (: