Lovely story Laevi. Love Timothy and Anthony and Piotr and Rasmus. The brothers from Poland are crazy. I cant believe they actually hurt Piotr so badly when he was still supposed to be on their side. Even more sad to realize that there are actually people like that in this world. I loved all the great images in the story, especially the scene of Timothy and Ant jogging in the woods and also the two visits to the barber shop. Those characters are truly special. I know it has been a while since you wrote this. It would be great to one day see what happened next for these characters, especially Piotr who is leaving everything behind in Poland on short notice. Take care and I hope all is well with you.
Kylee