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wow Rory has some conflicting personality issues yeah? I wonder if the demon is a shadow of someone Jonah knew and was unable to save..... will there be male preg-ers? thank YOU for updating~

Thank YOU! So I'm guessing here but will Rory and this demon become one in the future? Does the demon want Jonah for payment or something else cause it seemed to me when the demon and Rory spoke together it seemed like they both wanted Jonah....

This sounds interesting. Can't wait for more. Glad to see you back :D

Parallel. Much nicer ring than the 2-often used "paranormal" or metahuman, or any other stupid word given 2 a person tat can do things others can't. An explanation of the cuff would go far in explaining the significance here. Also, in the event that he was already known to b a parallel, arises the question of why he didn't use his powers(which I'm also confused about)in order to attempt 2 frighten away theyr pursuers b4 te situation became desperate. One of the antagonists said "breaker" but it was only explained that the spear "disappeared" & that the MCs "fell after it". So I wonder why a destructive word is used for an ability that sounds more like teleportation. I look forward to reading more and gleaning a true sense of this tale. U have an intriguing start, keep it up. Rukia

I need more please~

Seems like this is going to be another great one from you ☺