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for Parallel

by Alasdair-you

person smint45
schedule January 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh that was so amazing!!!! My hope for getting a Jonah and Rory paring goes up with Rory beeing immortal^^ I already start to love Hadley!!!! I really hope he will teach Rory to fight that evil Breaker!!!!! So can't wait to see where this will go!!!!! Thanks you so much for the fast update again!!!! See you again soon!!!!

person smint45
schedule January 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god another update!!! I'm so happy!!!! I really wouldn't have expected that teacher would be Hadley but now that I think back it really makes sense!!!! So can't wait to see what will happen next!!!! Thank you sooo much for the two updates in a row!!!!! Hope to read you again soon!!!

person smint45
schedule January 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god you updated this story that made me soooo happy!!!!! I really love the elvin city and now we finally understand why they need Rory so much!!!! I really hope they will be able to rescue Hadley and maybe he can teach Rory!!!! And I really want to know more about the oath Jonah made!!!! I still hope him and Rory will get into an relationship some time^^ So Love this story!!! Really hope to read you again soon!!!!!

schedule December 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Very interesting story so far!  I'd love to see more. Xoxo Robin

person smint45
schedule June 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god i really missed a chapter!!! I'm so sorry!!!! I really liked the chapter from Jonahs point of view!!!! So their king is dieing maybe thats why teh elves are in trouble!!! So can't wait for more!!! See you again soon!!!
person smint45
schedule April 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Absoloutly fantastic chapter!!!! I really like Johna but i was surprised by his blue eyes in this chapter I thought he had golden eyes or did I understand that wrong? I really hope you will update again soon!!!! See you!!!
person Tahn
schedule March 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Eek! What on earth is in him? I wonder why the elves are dying?
person smint45
schedule March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great new story!!! can't wait to read more altough it is really confiusing at this point!!! I still like it very much!!! Hope there will be some explantions in the next chapters^^ See you again soon!!!
person Tahn
schedule March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm really looking forward to learning more about this world and how it works.
person smint45
schedule March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter!!! I already love this story!!! It gets more and more interessting!!! Can't wait for more!!! See you again soon!!!