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April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really into femslash, but something made me click on this one. I like it, which surprised me. I wanna learn more about this story's world and its people. I hope you keep going.
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March 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Coming together quite nicely. I'm interested to see how this pair will interact in a more personal setting, I'll be checking back in hoping to see a new chapter ;)
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March 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed what you have for a start here. I do hope that you intend to continue with your writing, as I see quite a bit of potential for this to turn into an excellent story. You have some very good, realistic chemistry building between your two lead characters. Update soon, please.
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March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
The reason your story does this is because you have used a line of ********* instead of using the page break available when you upload the story. Please delete the line of asterisks and refrain from using a full line of any characters as page breaks in the future. That should solve your problem.
Thank you, CL.Mustafic, AFF Archive Moderator