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William is just a deranged and delusional dude. And now... poor Vincent. Oh and I'd smack the king for interfering and driving Vincent away, I know that happened last chapter but I'm not sure if I expressed my anger at him for that or not, now you know, whap the king with a rolled up newspaper once for me. CL

Arrrg, so now I remember why I liked Vincent and I hate what's going to happen to him just so you know. Why must you torture your characters, why?? CL

It makes me all happy that Vincent and Damien can be sexy friends now! Eeeee xoxo Robin

I'm really enjoying this so far. I went ahead and read Dragon King before this and I got to say, you seem to be growing better molding and displaying the characters personalities and writing for them. If sound effects could be embedded in these, know I'd included a level up one for you. :D Could be the theme for me though -points up at name-, this seems a good bit darker and DK seemed a bit ...fluffier, I guess? ...damn, this is a pretty terribly done review, but yeah, going to keep reading this so please keep on about your business.

I hate it when people get kidnapped, just saying. CL

Ugghh, I forgot what an asshole Vincent was in the beginning.

I almost passed this up because I thought it was the other story you posted, The Dragon Mage one. Even though I already read this chapter, I'm excited to see it posted here... Finally. :D CL