rate_review Reviews

lol poor Trick. He's a really cute character. awesome update! thank you!

Ok... that was hot.

I'm really enjoying this story. I'm interested in where you will take it. As per the usual for you (I'm sure), I wish there was more meat to the chapters. Other than that I have zero complaints....and I'm not even meaning this as a complaint either. Lol! Just a preference of mine. Drew is very intriguing to me. He seems intelligent and shady...kinda cray-cray,insightful with a sense of humor to boot. I do indeed look forward to seeing more of this.

Trick has a not so little kink~ i love it!

The chapter is a bit short but really cute <3

Nice update, I got kinda confused in some parts of the story when there are laps in time, one moment Trick goes out and then the next line he's back and like 'wow'. Maybe you should try to add some kind of a sign for those laps, like- 'later that day'/'they passed the time and by evening' - or anything, really. I love your characters so far, you have a unique style of writing that is so clearly yours, hard to explain hehe, but your choice for words and dialogues is very realistic and draw and clear picture of what each character is like, and what the general environment in the story is like. I'll stay updated with your story, hope to read from yuo again soon!

Great beginning, my only complaint would be the chapter was too short! I can't wait for an update. Reformed bad-boy dishing out the discipline - oh this is going to be good!