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March 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I think everyone has to admit this story is hot. Your writing is yummy. Xoxo Robin
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March 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
The more I read this story the more I love it. Your writing is wonderful and sexy. Rawr. Xoxo Robin
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March 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Nooo im sorry, im not a reviewer, i know, im a terrible reader. But i sooo enjoy this c:
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March 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
not to be a weirdo but i love the rimjob chapter
and is something gonna go down with AJ im sensing either a fistfight or a threesome
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March 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. The last two chapters were really hot and I can see that Drew might start getting possessive of Trick which I'm really looking forward to. It might also be interesting if Drew had some friends come over and see how that affected things with Trick. I also don't remember if you said why Drew was arrested which is something I'd like to know
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March 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Nooooo! It was one of the best chapters. I loved it, I don't always have a lot of time to review as I would like so unfortunately I'm kinda selfish and use that time reading. =^_^= I must say that with every new chapter you put up. I can see an improvement in your writing. Which of course excites me cause I can't wait to see what you come up with!
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March 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Don't get too discouraged about the reviews, it's actually a pretty common author annoyance here. Most stories don't get a review a chapter.
The last two chapters were really good, I am waiting for AJ's concern to become more active.
I would *fucking love* to see the second part of this chapter again from Drew's POV, any chance for a bonus? I'd really like to know more about Drew, is he just messing around? Is he a sadist? Is he smug as fuck finding his cousin to be such an easily controlled slut? I can't wait to see where, how far, this goes.
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March 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great! Drew is a dick. Please don't ever change him.
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, a little surprised, I thought Trick would have at lest said something, he is just argumentative by nature.
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February 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Fun story, so far really light, can't wait for it to get deeper. I'd like to know more about Drew, maybe a chapter from his point of view?
I don't mind the short chapters, you've got a good pace going, good luck writing and keeping it up.