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@ demosnankegod, Jealous of what you stupid fuck? I am not a writer, just a reader. I just can't stand when people are rewarded for a poor, half assed job when so many writers on here write decent length chapters and they don't get many or any reviews. That's all. Get it, idiot??

@ demosnankegod & The_CL (aka CL Mustafic), Jealous of what you stupid fucks? I am not a writer, just a reader. I just can't stand when people are rewarded for a poor, half assed job when so many writers on here write decent length chapters and they don't get many or any reviews. That's all. Get it, idiots??

Correct, you are not a admin.....just a moderator. Please excuse my mistake. However, admin or moderator.......same BS. AFF is a site, nothing more. Step off your pedestal. Congrats to the author of this story who all of a sudden got lots of attention and a few more reviews from the sheep. Next time, if you only want positive reviews.....state that. Or better yet, write a great story and let people review if they choose to. Reviews are optional.

It's sad that people are assholes. Anyway, I hope you decide to continue this story. I had concerns at first but found my self drawn to your story. I really hope you come back to this. I'm curious to how you'll close out this story.

Oh yeah, it's soooooo sad that people are assholes. Boo hoo, cry me a river. None of you wanted to leave reviews before and now all of a sudden, the sheep come running. Interesting that none of the latest reviewers are logged in to leave reviews. Are you the author of this story by any chance? Maybe you are reviewing your own story? All you would need to do is log out of your author account and post a review anonymously. Hmm....

First of all to you GeorginaB, if you stop posting your story, you let the TROLL win. Do not let this insignificant little asswipe stop you from doing something you enjoy and that obviously others are enjoying. I had someone like this once review one of my stories, not as relentlessly as your little barnacle but it still made me angry, yes you read that right, I was angry. I kept posting, the only way to stick it to the jealous little creeps is to keep keeping on. You'll always have people who are jealous of other's successes but the people who succeed should not feel bad for doing so or let those less successful hold them down to their lower, more pathetic levels. Keep posting, delete the Anon reviews because if they don't have the spine to log in and leave their review, their opinion means nothing because they are cowards that need to hide behind Anon which is usually synonymous with troll in the internet world. Have the staff disable Anon reviews and I bet the harassment will stop because Anon doesn't have the guts to put a name on them. There is nothing wrong with your story. I've read it, I'm one of those that isn't so great at reviewing, I'm trying to get better about it because as someone whose heart jumps at the sight of a review, I should know better. You need to put more faith in the hit counter, it means people are reading and that's what's important. We all love reviews but they are rare little gems and most of us are happy to receive just one, treasure the ones you get instead of mourning the fact that you haven't received more and you will be a much happier writer. I will await your return which I know will be soon because I bet you have the courage your would be oppressor does not. I logged in to leave this review just so Anon can tell that it wasn't left by you, the author. CL

Thank you CL Mustafic or whatever your pathetic username used to be. The only reason you are somewhat relevant on AFF is because you are friends with BronxWench (the moderator). I'm sure you pissed your pants when she started reviewing your stories. Thank her and Tahn and Lisa for all their reviews.....now you actually have some reviews. Isn't it great when you have buddies who can build your self-esteem up?? So you read GeorginaB's story? Didn't you just love the itty bitty chapters?? It doesn't bother you that some people write 4 paragraphs per chapter and call themselves ''authors'' and here you are, writing lengthy chapters and you are getting as many reviews or even less?? LOL! PS. The only reason I don't bother to log in is because I have a lot to say to a select few on here. And if anonymous reviews are ever disabled, none of you ''authors'' will ever get any reviews because most people can't be bothered to log in to review (when they even bother to review). LMFAO!

I'm sorry you feel the need to reassess. Everyone like to be validated with reviews and ratings, but so long as you still enjoy your story, that's all that matters. Even if it is a pen name, it takes a lot of courage to decide to share your writing. I agree with CL, the hit counter is a great tool, you can actually get a feel of how many regular readers you have. Whenever I get reviews, I reread them constantly. And even if there aren't reviews, someone will always read it, I definitely will keep an eye out for more updates. This is a great story, and since you updated so often I never really minded the short chapters. I enjoyed the dream sequence and I'm really interested in seeing if Trick bothers to respond to Drew once he is able to, or if he's going to continue retreating inward and not bothering to fight back with Drew. I kind of expect him to retreat, for awhile longer at least until there is some sort of breaking point or something else changes.

Please don't give up on writing. I'm enjoying this story. There are just alot of silent readers and don't leave a review or can't find a way to express what they feel. I'm like that . Please keeping writing because I want to know how this story ends. Hopefully this review makes you feel better.

I truly love your story and I always get so excited when I see you updated! I literally love everything about this story, I just struggle with articulation so I usually only leave reviews at the completion of a story so I can give my overall opinion in a well thought out, multiple paragraph review. I am leaving one now instead because I fear you won't finish the story unless I do. I am sure that you will get more reviews eventually, but the authors you talk about who get multiple reviews for each chapter have been on this site for a long period of time and have paid their dues and become well known. I read some stories specifically because I love the writer even if the story sounds boring. I know it doesn't seem fair, but you will get multiple reviews without begging or whining in the future as long as you keep writing such fascinating! While I am not at all complaining, I do admit that maybe you would get more reviews if the chapters were slightly longer. Thank you so much for yourte