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For the record, I think your writing is awesome.  Vaguely hoping you decide to finish the story, though I can't personally decide if I want Drew to get his commupence of to get a clue.

 

Anyway - excellent work.

Congratulations! Your story attracted a troll. It's like an honor to all good writers. Especially becuase yours keeps coming back. Haha, He/she most love your story a hell of a lot! Anyway on to why I'm here. Ahem. I enjoyed what is written here and while yes I think your characters need a little more depth this is a great piece so far. Next time you update, and I hope you do, maybe put a little "why" behind the way they act. I love tricks personality but he doesn't really have a reason behind his actions yet. Why does he like mindless vandalism? Did his mom verbally abuse him or is their a deeper reason for there relationship being rocky? You've cast the out these wonderful gems of characters and they only need to be polished to make the story into a true masterpiece.

Please, please, please write more. I started reading and couldn't stop and now i NEED to know what happens next. Love the characters and how the story evolves. i find the decisions the protagonists make very realistic. it gives me a feeling on how an abusive relationship might start. also how people might not be able to get out when they feel vulnerable, worthless or ashamed and there is no neutral place for them to go (-> staying with friends doesn't provide independency, but increases feeling like a burden) hope you write soon, do't give up on the story please.

can't wait for the next chapter

Hi GeorginaB. I've really enjoyed reading your story so far and I hope you continue. I've been checking this site regularly to see if you posted a new chapter. As a writer, I know that when you ask for feedback, it's not to stroke your ego, but to see if others enjoy your writing, also. You won't be able to please everyone. Some will love and others will hate your story. If you really enjoy writing and there are people out there who wants to read it (which there is) I think you should keep on doing it.

I am really disappointed that the people have to act this way. I really enjoy your story and I checked the site very often to see if it was updated. honestly it always made my day a little better to read the story. I really like the characters and would like to see what happens but I also understand that for every hundred "good jobs" you get it only takes one asshole to take all that confidence away. I have written a story on another site and understand the want for reviews. It's not attention seeking or a want to build an ego. It's just like how people want to told they matter everyday. Don't let the negativity of other people make you think badly about yourself and your writing. If writing was all one style it wouldn't be worth reading and your a unique individual that shouldn't be scrutinized for asking for feedback. I hope things get better for you and you continue doing what you obviously have a passion and talent for. Don't lose your passion and confidence to trolls. keep your head up and stand tall.

Don't listen to those asshats. I really enjoy your story and keep looking for your updates. Ignore those ignorant people. horrible reviews just mean they're jealous. keep working on your writing.

@ demosnankegod, Jealous of what you stupid fuck? I am not a writer, just a reader. I just can't stand when people are rewarded for a poor, half assed job when so many writers on here write decent length chapters and they don't get many or any reviews. That's all. Get it, idiot??

@ demosnankegod, Jealous of what you stupid fuck? I am not a writer, just a reader. I just can't stand when people are rewarded for a poor, half assed job when so many writers on here write decent length chapters and they don't get many or any reviews. That's all. Get it, idiot??

@ demosnankegod, Jealous of what you stupid fuck? I am not a writer, just a reader. I just can't stand when people are rewarded for a poor, half assed job when so many writers on here write decent length chapters and they don't get many or any reviews. That's all. Get it, idiot??