rate_review Reviews

I don't usually read minor2 tag fics (not going to dwell on those aspects), but since I had to add the tag myself lately, I thought I'd trust you, especially since you're venturing into horror. I'm glad I did. This was entertaining and mysterious. Well written and disturbingly easy to visualise. I am kind of disappointed she didn't get one of those little suckery things at her clitoris. Women, we can withstand a lot of pleasure, even if we're not up to even raising our head afterwards. Seems like the kind of monster that would create multiple orgasms. Oh, the cervix. I could tell you what that feels like (given an adequate word count), but then I'd have to kill you ;) Also, just for the horror, I kind of wanted to see her wonder if it hadn't necessarily impregnated her... but rather, laid eggs inside her. That would keep a person awake at night! And lastly, is it bad that I kept wondering about her Dad, and his instructions not to enter the cellar? Keeping the fuck-monster all for himself, is he? Lol But, yes, sorry! I've rambled on and on, but I did enjoy this. Well done! (aka Dafdes from the forums)

That ending really sold it for me. Her horrified reaction was keenly palpable in my mind and I doff my hat to you. That blind quest for normalcy afterwards was just brilliant. ... wow, I think I'm actually gushing. Please pardon that. Hrm. So my theory of what dad is up to: tentacle gigolo. Cause if machine-powered piston-driven didoes can be a thing, I shudder to think what could be charged for a half-hour of that thing's time.