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Please update this story. I want to find out what happens next. 

This is a really interesting story I mean I've seen the premise before but it looks really cool

I really hope that you continue this it's so interesting

Very interesting! I wish there was more! Xoxo Robin

Very good introduction to your world so far. I hope to see more chapters soon!

I think I'm going to like this story :) please continue!!

Interesting world you have created. Can't wait to see more of it.

This was a great 1st few chapters. Not cliche after ll even though the premise has been done before. Cheers to that. I look forward to reading more soon! :)

Oh I'm liking this story so far. Nazazi though doesn't behave as someone chronically sik would. Other than using the word sikly multiple times, and other than the sentence (Please, he smiled weakly, trying feebly to push the drake away from his shoulder.), he doesn't seem inhibited n his traveling(?) The only thing we know about what ails him is his "stripes being nearly white", which reminds me: are Nazazis ppl mostly human in appearance aside from stripes, or are they perhaps considered close to tigers, or another striped anthromorphic creature...??? The lack of clear description aside from briefly stating the differences of Nazazis and the crown prince's physiques leaves many questions. For instance, I only no Nazazi is short, slightly skinny but w lean muscles, has "pale stripes" and golden red eyes. I didn't notice any description of his facial features, his hair, his voice, or any other unique features, like animal ears or tails, or fur rather than naked skin, whether his eyes or stripes wer unique to royalty or himself, or even a mention of how long the MC has bin ill or how serious it is. I hope that those details can b revealed soon n a nxt update or 2, as the story reads very abstractly without at least sum mor detail. I hope my input isn't too critical & that it doesn't come off as harsh, as I'm trying 2 b constructive. I do like the idea of the plot and can't wait to c where u take it. Plz update soon Rukia

Can't wait to see more of this story.