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So, i'm in lovr snd i realy hope you haven't stoped this cute story

i love it! it's sweet! and ren is a sweet character!

Ahhh! I want more! I love it! Xoxo Robin

Oh my! More please!

I think your story as a lot of potential, but you seriously need to find some way (or someone) to edit and review your writing before you post it.
I've seen a lot of 'then', 'and' instead of other words and terms you could use.
I have no idea whether English is your native tongue, but either way, find a beta!
if you want me to help you with some editing, contact me on mail or on my tumblr <3

Are all dragons that gentle, and are we gonna see any of them?

Neat. As it is this could end on a good note w out any mor chapters, lol. Just as well, there is plenty of room 4 character development on not MCs parts. I'd luv 2 read Eldrigs pov.
Plz update soon
Rukia