rate_review Reviews

This story is interesting, but I'm having a really hard time understanding half of things that are happening. Things are hardly ever explained in this. It's like I'm watching a show in a language I've studied for a week, and there aren't any subtitles. I don't even know what the characters look like, just that Mihale has green eyes, and Aw has spots or something.

I adore this story. It's fascinating! Wonderful job. And I love the smut. You just smut it up as much as you want! Xoxo Robin

oo I'm so excited! I love it when you connect the stories to previous stories. super exciting! love it! Might have squealed like a little kid lol

Oh, yes, it's definitely getting alot more serious, although I do enjoy the way Aw can manage nonchalance: "“Ignore him, he just volunteered us for a suicide mission without realizing what he was doing,” Aw grumbled, closing the door behind the little male. That's just brilliant, right there. But seriously? This is getting a wee bit tense. Let's hope Mihale is going to be able to help Aw and Oyen, or this will be a very bad trip indeed.

Oh, my, this has gotten seriously complicated. I'm not at all sure I like Aw's chances here, and I sure as the hells have no clue what Oyen's thinking. Mihale's either going home of going to get them all killed... And Aw's right. Gods talk too much. :D

I just have to tell you that I love the way you write! The way scenes play out is always so much fun to read. With lines like "Can I pee on it?" And "Aw sniffed the air, detecting some sweet, some berry, and something that was almost like grain raped and molested by the tears of children." (Which had me choking on a cheeto, by the way.) I have always enjoyed reading about the characters you play with. Thank you for sharing.

Loved the mental image of the newspaper and what I pictured as a cat with peanut butter stuck on the roof of its mouth. I seemed to have missed an update, so on to the next chapter!

Awwww, the angry kitty just needed to be brushed. Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

What promise? Everyone here is having sex with everyone..only Aw and Mihale are...well dunno what the eff they're doing. Half the time i don't even understand this half english dialogue but I am interested in the story. It is baffling.

Okay, I somehow missed a chapter, so this is a two-chapter review. First off, I adore Oyen and his sass. Gods, what a perfectly yummy beta he is, and exactly right for Aw, who needs to be sassed. And Mihale likes Oyen, so that's all good. But fuck me sideways... M'wn is wonderful, and enigmatic, and seriously crazy, isn't he? And Mihale yelled at him! I love the little bucket of fierce! I am absolutely on the edge of my seat waiting to see exactly what Mihale promised M'wn, though. And because sometimes there is a line that is so perfect... "He didn’t want to play with gods, they played fucking dirty." Right there. I love you for that line.