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Oh, my poor Aw... this does NOT bode well at all. Running off into that many portents is never a good thing, and smart Sidhe would go the other way very, VERY fast. Unfortunately, Aw is very smart, but he's also very determined to do this thing for Mihale's sake. Still... this bit: "What’s the worst that could happen?” “The last time you said that, I got swallowed by a behemoth that wandered out of its territory.” Yeah. Right there...I'd be going the other way, very VERY fast. :D

Your stories are completely cryptic; they need much fuller explanations of characters, plots, A to Z. It's incredibly frustrating trying to decipher them. Which is why I'm giving up. As the author you get them in your head but they just don't translate. It shouldn't take this much work to decipher a story.

Once more a double header of a review... At least Aw has learned a little more about Mihale, and why he could understand Mihale and then not. It helps to know you're not going crazy, even if you're a big male, and especially when you're suddenly not the biggest male in the room. I did like Oyen's sass, though. He's pretty sassy for a beta. And I adored Mihale's accusing Aw of being likely to have sex with vegetables. But in the next chapter, it's terribly sweet of Aw to offer to kill a god for Oyen... and there was lovely snuggles for Mihale and Aw. I'm dying to see how this will work out!

Yeah an update! Also, glad to hear you are working on the Alphas. Love that universe too!

Una referring to his father is confusing since I don't remember him having one. Granted, my memory is not that reliable. Also the relationship between Father/Ayato and how much Una knows about it is unclear - I mean previously Una didn't seem to fully understand Ayato.

Wow you have just blew my mind I have no idea where you're going with this but I love it. I'm glad you brought back "sparkly" i love Mik he's my favorite and do we get to see Tanis and Rava? *jumps up n down* Ayato's out! I can't wait to see what happens there... Im just sad Illuva didn't keep her word she seemed like a down to earth kind of god. I'm hoping there is a reason for that. We'll u have me on the edge of my seat can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^

To start off with, I have to say I love the world you have created, and the characters are amazing. However, while I loved where the story started, I found the farther I got into it, the more confused I got. There's not much explanation and a lot of the time (especially with the god stuff) I have no idea what's going on. Which is a terrible shame because it seems like it could be a great story, if only I could actually follow it. However, I keep reading just for the characters, Aw is hilarious and the relation between him and Mihale is so fun to watch. I also want to thank you for the quick updates! It's always lovely to come home to a new chapter.

Another two-chapter review from the desperately scattered... This has gotten very serious, and very dark. I think when you have a Death telling you it's all gone to shit, you need to sit up and take serious notice. I don't think poor Aw ever thought he'd be in the middle of something this large. I'm also pretty sure Oyen's going to have a small breakdown when he finds out what's really going on. But seriously, you have gods breaking promises, playing games, and welding souls together, and Aw and Mihale are central to it all. I have such a bad feeling this is going to end badly...

Ooh Una is here! Muan wants Rel to be resurrected (makes me super happy). I don't understand what messages that Aw has been disregarding but I want to find out. I feel like we are getting to the plot, though the sexy times will be missed.

Oh my! And now the lovely Una steps in. I wonder if Durth will make an appearance as well.