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for Involuntary Indebtedness

by CL.Mustafic

person Anon
schedule February 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is definitely different, but that's not a bad thing. I like Tanner, the sassy little shit. He's all eighteen year old defiance and bravado, and in so far over his head that it's breathtaking. I think I'll keep reading this for a big, and see how it sorts itself out...
person Tahn
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, I'm glad you finally found a title. Can't wait to see how this one goes :D
schedule January 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ok, seriously, CL, you've got to stop updating and writing new stories! I can't catch up! lol Just kidding - don't stop! :)

Manny's a pisser, and of course Tanner's a hoot. :) I like Dakota; I think he's going to be a good friend for Tanner.

I'm looking forward to chapter three! Now on to Falling for Her. :) Oh yeah, you have two new stories I need to read, right? I better find them...
person MissChaotic
schedule January 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this one so far! I can tell it's going to be a favorite of mine :)
person Nyny
schedule January 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Sooo, no happy ending?
person starr
schedule January 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am so confused. This story is nothing like your other stories and I almost feel like this story was written by a different author. I will stick with 'The Heart Wants'.
schedule January 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
CL!!!! You have a new story up!!! lol

It's terrific!!! This poor kid, but WOW, 9 and 3/4 inches - holy shit! lol

I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

What's with the new layout, format, whatever with the stories? Not liking it...(I hate change! lol)