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Hehe. I like this story, he's funny. Also, don't know if you know it, but your review replies link is a link to a picture of a share icon.

Great chapter, CL! :) Tanner had me lol'ing as he usually does. :D It really surprised me to read that Dakota takes shit like that from his abusive b/f. He seems so strong and confident. He shouldn't put up with that crap and make excuses for him. There is no excuse for abuse. Ok, now I have to r&r "Calling the Ball", which I read last night too. :) Oh, and what did you mean, CL, when you said the Captcha was not a coincidence?

Well, that was definitely an experience. Gotta say, as a straight guy dipping his toe into m/m for the first time willingly, I think I picked the right story. Very easy to relate to Tanner. :D Like the pace, eases my squirming a bit while still holding my attention nice. Like/want to gut the boss, I'm probably as afraid of the day that can of worms gets opened as Tanner. Well, obviously not but I hope you get my meaning. So yeah, solid writing. I can see why you have such adoring fans. P.S. please do something terrible to Dakota's bf and probably the boss afterward. Oh, pretty please. -puppy eyes- P.P.S. Forget a towel, that couch needs lit on fire. -_-;

Right, so, I suppose it's pretty much stating the obvious to say that the Boss is creeping me out far more than I'd expected. Tanner is in for a world of shit, I think, and he'd better start making a few friends for when it all hits. And why do I have a terrible feeling Dakota's going to pay the most for trying to help Tanner? This is definitely not a fluffy tale, but I'm far too hooked to quit now.

All so very suspicious...

'What Gets Gay Guys off for Dummies' - lol, I was lmao at that one, CL! :) Tanner really needs to be careful with 'da boss'. If Dakota was nervously looking around the mall parking lot, whatever he had wanted to tell Tanner must not be good news. Loved the introduction of Brenden. Yep, Tanner better carry around a towel to sit on, just in case. lol

Well, hells if Tanner isn't going to be putting chairs under his door tonight. That was probably the most ominous shopping trip in the history of shopping trips, and I have to say, Brenden did creep me out a bit, too. Seriously, dude, drinking orange juice straight from the jug? This is why domestic violence happens, you know. I am really liking this story, and while I'm duly warned that it's not going to be warm and fuzzy, I still want to see how this plays out.

He's so nervous he reminds me of a rabbit about to run. But, I can't say I really blame him.

I think he should be the one getting fuck, because he's paying back for his mom. But the story is going well.love it

Yeah, I'm surprised the boss isn't the first one in line to pop Tanner's cherry! lol I'll bet he never had a "meeting" to go to; I bet he went in his office and relived the video shoot(pun definitely intended!). haha

This is turning into a very humorous story, CL! :)