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for Involuntary Indebtedness

by CL.Mustafic

schedule April 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I finally caught up with all your stories, CL, and now I see you updated again! lol I was away all week visiting schools with one of my kids, so I finally had a chance to read all your updates last night. Poor Tanner - he was really put through the ringer with all those guys! (snicker, snicker) I wonder what the boss has in store for him now.
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Out of the frying pan, and into the fire, as my grandmother would have said. Tanner is spectacular at burning bridges, isn't he? I doubt Dakota would lift a hand to protect Tanner any longer. There's only so many times you can catch a beating for an ungrateful brat before you wash your hands of him, and I wouldn't blame Dakota in the slightest. Manny's the only one left that Tanner hasn't totally alienated, and possibly Cam, but I don't see either of them sticking their necks out for Tanner. And speaking of that... I have a very bad feeling about the boss, and what he might have in store for Tanner. Somehow, I don't think he'll consider Dakota's punishment sufficient.
person Tahn
schedule April 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I am feeling worse and worse for this guy. I hope he gets retribution of some kind.
person thestralhorse
schedule April 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Omg how can you leave us with such a cliff hanger again? I loved the chapter and can't wait for the next chapter! It will be torture waiting to find out what happens with the boss! Thank you for the update :)
person Falis
schedule April 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good. Keep going :)
person rainbowcupcak3
schedule April 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
omg poor guy I so did not see that coming lol.....cuming .... poor guy
person Tahn
schedule March 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. That's really not good.
schedule March 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I was sitting in the pediatric dentist's waiting room, waiting for my kid to come out, when I thought it would be great to catch up on all your stories! So I did! lol I just got home and wanted to review this one first. I don't even wanna know how bad Tanner's gonna get lectured from puking all over his come. lol Man, he should have just willed it back down. Awesome chapter, CL! I really like Tanner; he's very comical! :)
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Holy hells, is Tanner ever in for a world of shit. Given his bratty behavior, he's not going to get any help with that, either, is he? I'm sort of torn between sympathy for him being put in this position, and irritation at him for being such a drama queen about it. For all his going on about being straight, his mental musings about the girls he's known and wanted isn't much better than what he's going through, although I'm pretty sure, being a smartass teen, he's not self-aware enough to grasp that little nuance. I love this story, though, even if I want to send Tanner to his room after giving him a spanking in the not-at-all-nice sort of way. :D
person Sarkukka
schedule March 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm so hooked. Can't wait to read more. Just a brilliant fic! Thanks so much.