I seriously love this story, but the things that happened to Finian disturbed me so much. I kept thinking somehow he'll get away before, but no such luck. T_T I want to get my hands on that elder and do things to him that I'm sure he won't enjoy. >.> Please write more, I want to know what happens next. <3
Oh no Fins Promismark is gone!!!! I really hope they will be able to rescue him from this evil elder!!! See you again soon!!!
Oh my god that chapter was amazing!!! Hope Fins Dad will be ok!!! And that fin will be ok Ally really needs to rescue him!!!! Hope he will be alright!!! See you again soon!!!!
I just discoverd this story and i really love it!!!! I wonder is this finished? Altough you started the story of Hareth and winter I have the feeling this one is still incomplete since Alistair and Fin havent maded jet!!! Anyway I adore this story and i hope that it will continue!!! I will now go to reading the second one!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!
@ramblingrobin : will you update Prophilaxis anytime soon? I really hope so cause I really love that story a lot!!!
I think this is the best fantasy story ever!! can't wait to read more :D
I really like this story :) And I like the last chapter ! when I read the first chapters, I thought something like that would happen :)I can't wait to read more! I hope we will be able to read chapter 10 soon :)
Love this story and can hardly wait for more! The characters are so well developed and silly /enchanting.
I just read chapter 2. The whole pink unicorn thing is so cute!!! I got some questions though. So, Jack can see though Lee'en, and probably Jack would have said something if his penis or fingers disappeared as they had oral or anal sex, so I'm guessing Jack's parts are still visible inside Lee'en? Unless Jack completely just didn't look down, so he didn't notice? But what about his cum? When Lee'en swallows, does the cum turn invisible? Or can you see it go down his throat and settle 'round stomach height? Maybe you answer this in later chapters. I kept wondering all through the whole scene though, LOL.
Wow just wow! I just started reading your story & kept passing by it every time I look for a very romantic book thanks for writing this, its so very touching that I had to re-read some of the words to feel the characters' love.
I'm loving this story more with each chapter that is updated.
