rate_review Reviews

Chapter One What a great set up. I was swept up from the start, and read right through to the end of the chapter. I did see a few typos, but the dream sequence was good, and there's an atmosphere of reality slowly and subtly winding down. The bad guy is great. And, like him, I'll definitely be coming back for more. Thank you for sharing your work :)

Chapter Two That was a long scene, but I enjoyed it. The lasting image was when she caught sight of herself in the mirror. Very well done. I suspect the Minor1 tag will come into play next chapter, so I leave it here. But I did really love reading the first two chapters!

No fair. I want my own Demon Master named Dominic...so fucking hott♥

Wow! This is pretty hott! I mean its sucks they are being poisoned but she is getting the stuff to make them feel better from him...even though it makes it worse too. But I cant wait for him (the devil) to take her! Im sure it will be exciting! Well done♥