Its been so long since I've reviewed...but this was an aamazing chapter! Sherry is a fucking badass! I cant wait for more!♥
dark chapter as warned, but, when compared to the evils that are currently going on in this world, i can honestly say that this chapter wasn't something i was overly surprised about. some of the atrocious actions that took place involving the minors truly occur in the most horrific places on earth. to see the demon (Bear) deal with it as he did was, in my mind at least, one of the better methods i've ever heard of to punish the behavior that preceded the punishment. i will also admit a very hard bias against those specific types of perpetrators as i've known one personally, so, my 'approval' of the punishment should be taken with a grain of salt or two. however, this chapter deals with uncomfortable things that unfortunately happen and truthfully we shouldn't run from the evils of the world but rather confront them and face them head on as this chapter has done.
remember, there are more foul forms of evil that exist in this world outside of the worlds we create with mere letters and a keyboard. never be afraid to put something on paper because i can promise you, somewhere out in the real world, there are worse horrors. just keep in mind that Stephen King made a hell of a lot of money writing works similar to this and doesn't shrink or back down when confronted by naysayers say he shouldn't. your writing style or material isn't for the faint of heart, but for those who can forge on, it is an intriquing tale of how a demon might act and interact with people